First and Second page of Roar dummy.

So I am hitting the agent thing hard. Stimola, and Sherman say no go on a query. Kouts should be getting hers in the mail today. Schulman says send it May 1st. Here’s the first page of the dummy for your critique. Click the picture for a better look, please.


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